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Smurf said:I need a better conclusion.. I hate conclusions.
Yes, it's a recommendation. It just doesn't feel right. Doesn't seem like a strong enough ending.fourier jr said:conclusions should be either predicitons or recommendations, is yours one of those two?
Thanks, didn't catch that.Gokul43201 said:Yikes I ain't going to read that !
PS : Missing a comma after 'clearly' - first word of second paragraph. There...done my bit !
Glad you brought that up. That sentence didn't make sense to me. After reading it five times over, I gave up on it, went to the next word, found an error, went a few words past, stumbled again and quit. Sounded to me like the second clause was actually about voting, rather than non-voting.Math Is Hard said:JFrom a Libertarian perspective, not only is non-voting
(un?)desirable, but it could be considered unethical or possibly even violent, as well.
So why is legitimizing the majority state necessarily unethical or violent in it's self?
by participating in the electoral process, serves to accomplish two things: First, they’re will is imposed upon the minority if their vote wins. And second,
This perspective of majority rule argues that voting is nothing more than the majority enforcing it’s will
it's=it isway of defending it’s self
eighteen. sue me.ron damon said:I glanced through the first sentences, and read the last couple of paragraphs. Your presentation is competent enough, but is a little lacking in originality. How old are you again?
Yeah.. I know it's wrong but I keep doing it. Thanks.moose said:End of page two
You seem to make this mistake quite often. I would search for it's and make sure it's used just like I did and not trying to show possession.
EDIT: Right after that, sentance after I think
it's=it is
I used to make that mistake all the time too :/
Smurf said:eighteen. sue me.
And now, you're no longer a Marxist. Instead, you're in an insane asylum.ron damon said:you're doing fine... at around your age I was still half a Marxist
and yet, despite how far you've come... you're still not an anarchist.ron damon said:you're doing fine... at around your age I was still half a Marxist
That was the only thing I found not mentioned so far by anyone else.The Libertarian sees a political system of consensus as necessary to make sure everyone has a degree of autonomy and can maintain their individual freedom from being imposed [upon ]by the majority.
Yeah I thought about that, hope for the best. I did change a fair bit after posting that though, more than just what you guys posted, so maybe she'll find it or maybe not. Either way, I can prove that I am, in fact, Smurf.Moonbear said:And now poor Smurf is going to be accused of plagiarism when his teacher runs the essay through some online search service and finds that it's copied verbatim from some kid named "Smurf" posting on physics forums.
Being small and blue should be a definite giveaway.Smurf said:Yeah I thought about that, hope for the best. I did change a fair bit after posting that though, more than just what you guys posted, so maybe she'll find it or maybe not. Either way, I can prove that I am, in fact, Smurf.
Smurf said:Yeah I thought about that, hope for the best. I did change a fair bit after posting that though, more than just what you guys posted, so maybe she'll find it or maybe not. Either way, I can prove that I am, in fact, Smurf.
LOLOL.moose said:You know, your name on the doc file is a strong clue.
haha, irrefutable proof!moose said:You know, your name on the doc file is a strong clue.