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The discussion focuses on a request for feedback on a 10th Grade Honors English essay that involves character analysis. The author seeks opinions on the introduction and overall structure, adhering to strict guidelines that prohibit personal pronouns and require quotes with page numbers. There is uncertainty regarding the correct placement of page numbers in citations. The author expresses frustration with the difficulty of obtaining constructive feedback. The thread emphasizes the importance of clarity and adherence to assignment rules in academic writing.
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I've had lots of problems getting people to give me their opinions and corrections on my essay, could you guys read like a paragraph of it or more and tell me what you think?

http://www10.brinkster.com/kenikov/projects.html

(it is the first link, in PDF form).
 
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What class is it for?
(I’m looking at how you introduce the topic, stay on point, etc.)
 
The way we do things is very, very strict. It was the first time I read rules like that so it may seem odd (to me, the rules were). I was asked to start off with 2 paragraphs, the first one could not have any references to the book.

The essay is character analyzation. Of course, no "I, me, myself" etc. There had to be quotes with the page number. I wasn't sure if the page number came before or after the period, please check that to see if I am right and I consistently put it in the right place, though I doubt I did.

It is an essay for 10th Grade Honors English.
 
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