Another reu personal statement thread

In summary, the conversation revolved around a request for criticism on a statement of purpose for a research program. The person was concerned about the opening and was looking for suggestions and criticisms. They also mentioned that they were willing to proofread the document, but did not have a Google Docs account. The conversation ended with a discussion about the forum rules and the Google doc being taken down.
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Takuza
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I don't think anyone really likes these threads, but I could use some assistance. Could anyone offer me some criticism on my statement of purpose below, for an REU? This one is really an amalgamation of a couple of ones that I wrote for specifically for different programs, which all more of less asked me to briefly explain why I was interested in research and the fields I was interested in, as well as describing past experiences. In this way instead of posting 6 different ones, I will just absorb what I learn from this one. I am particularly concerned with the opening

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1EnqonVHP8Tw1MPGPet3GTwzIRAbToMVYui7qQ20Xox4/edit

any suggestions/criticisms would be appreciated, thanks. Also let me know if you cannot access the doc
 
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Gonna go ahead and violate the rules with this one time bump.
 
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Takuza said:
Gonna go ahead and violate the rules with this one time bump.

Don't worry, bumping once is not against the rules :-p
 
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I would totally be down to proofreading this, but I'm one of the cool kids that only has Hotmail and has no intention of getting a Google Docs account until I absolutely have to. Please feel free to PM the document to me.
 
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micromass said:
Don't worry, bumping once is not against the rules :-p

He was probably thinking of the 24-hour rule:

Do not "bump" one of your threads to the top of a forum's thread list by posting a basically empty message to it, until at least 24 hours have passed since the latest post in the thread; and then do it only once per thread.

But I congratulate him on KNOWING the rules
 
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I responded to your message.

Anyone who was wondering - the Google doc has been taken down.
 

FAQ: Another reu personal statement thread

What should I include in my personal statement for a research experience program?

Your personal statement should highlight your academic background and research interests, as well as any relevant experience and skills that make you a strong candidate for the program. You should also discuss your career goals and how this program will help you achieve them.

How long should my personal statement be?

The length of your personal statement may vary depending on the program's specific requirements, but generally it should be around 500-700 words. It is important to be concise and focused, so make sure to only include relevant information.

Can I mention my non-academic experiences in my personal statement?

Yes, you can include non-academic experiences that are relevant to your research interests or demonstrate skills that will be valuable in the program. However, make sure to connect these experiences to your academic and career goals.

How should I structure my personal statement?

Your personal statement should have a clear introduction, body, and conclusion. In the introduction, briefly introduce yourself and your interests. The body should be divided into paragraphs that discuss your academic background, research experience, skills, and career goals. The conclusion should summarize your main points and reiterate your interest in the program.

How can I make my personal statement stand out?

To make your personal statement stand out, be authentic and show your passion for your chosen field. Use specific examples and anecdotes to illustrate your experiences and skills. Also, make sure to proofread carefully and ask for feedback from others to ensure your statement is clear and well-written.

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